Oct 16, 2006 17:49
17 yrs ago
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French term

autour de ses reins

French to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature POEM
"S'evader
prive de souffle
prendre la route
autour de ses reins
avec pour armes et bagages
une poignee de cerfeuil"
Proposed translations (English)
3 +6 around his waist

Discussion

Liza Tripp (asker) Oct 16, 2006:
context it is a funeral scene, the "cerfeuil" refers to a haitian funeral tradition...
Julie Barber Oct 16, 2006:
do you have any more context? or things that you can tell us about the setting?

Proposed translations

+6
4 mins
Selected

around his waist

Should be "privé de souffle" - short of breath?

reins = kidneys > equiv. Eng. expression

// with coup de reins - a shuffle / feint, running also

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Note added at 4 mins (2006-10-16 17:54:05 GMT)
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his/her waist I should say
Peer comment(s):

agree Janet Ross Snyder
48 mins
Thanks JLR
agree gabuss
2 hrs
Thanks
agree Ben Gaia : Probably leaves tucked into the waistband.
6 hrs
Thanks Ben
agree Barbara Cochran, MFA
9 hrs
Thanks femme
agree narasimha (X) : you have got it right
9 hrs
Thanks Nara
agree divas
1 day 36 mins
Thanks Divas!
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