Glossary entry (derived from question below)
French term or phrase:
n’auront plus de secrets pour vous
English translation:
No more guesswork with X
Added to glossary by
veratek
Jan 22, 2013 17:59
11 yrs ago
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French term
n’auront plus de secrets
Non-PRO
French to English
Marketing
General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
partner newsletter
Le "How to order" Zeepy est arrivé ! Cette plaquette vous aidera en toute circonstance : tendances du marché de l’internet mobile, les outils pour vous accompagner, les arguments de vente, dimensionner un projet, présentation des produits et services…etc les solutions Zeepy n’auront plus de secrets pour vous !
Proposed translations
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Proposed translations
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No more guesswork with the Zeepy solutions!
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will have no secrets for you
x
Peer comment(s):
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AllegroTrans
: it's literal but doesn't sound natural in context
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Lara Barnett
: It sounds a bit odd to use "secrets" in this context, but to say "have no secrets for you" sounds like a very incorrect way to use English.
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3 mins
Will no longer be a mystery to you
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+3
37 mins
you'll know Zeepy inside out
I'm not sure from the context given that mentioning solutions is essential, but if it's for a marketing brochure it needs to be kept short, simple and positive. A literal translation of not having any secrets or mystery anymore sounds rather negative to my ears - as though it's quite a complicated concept to get your head around.
I find this solution sounds much more positive and is a punchy and natural way of putting this message across.
I find this solution sounds much more positive and is a punchy and natural way of putting this message across.
Note from asker:
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Peer comment(s):
agree |
Wolf Draeger
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Thank you, Wolf.
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agree |
katsy
2 hrs
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Thanks, katsy.
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Solen Fillatre
: love it!
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Thank you, Solen.
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3 hrs
you'll become a Zeepy whizz/master (in no time)!
Zeepy - Zippy - Whizz!
Zeepy geek-masters then graduate to become Zeewhizzes or Zeepmasters :-D
Zeepy geek-masters then graduate to become Zeewhizzes or Zeepmasters :-D
Example sentence:
This leaflet will answer all your question...you'll become a Zeepy whizz in no time!
This leaflet will answer all your question...you'll become a Zeepy master in no time!
Discussion
Thanks for your suggestions!