Glossary entry

French term or phrase:

n’auront plus de secrets pour vous

English translation:

No more guesswork with X

Added to glossary by veratek
Jan 22, 2013 17:59
11 yrs ago
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French term

n’auront plus de secrets

Non-PRO French to English Marketing General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters partner newsletter
Le "How to order" Zeepy est arrivé ! Cette plaquette vous aidera en toute circonstance : tendances du marché de l’internet mobile, les outils pour vous accompagner, les arguments de vente, dimensionner un projet, présentation des produits et services…etc les solutions Zeepy n’auront plus de secrets pour vous !

Discussion

chris collister Jan 23, 2013:
This very oddly written. Presumably it means that, with Zeepy at your fingertips, the secrets of the universe will be laid bare, or something equivalently purple....
veratek (asker) Jan 22, 2013:
positive and punchy - that's exactly the tone

Thanks for your suggestions!

Proposed translations

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No more guesswork with the Zeepy solutions!

another suggestion
Peer comment(s):

agree Verginia Ophof : I like this one !!
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thanks!
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will have no secrets for you

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Peer comment(s):

neutral AllegroTrans : it's literal but doesn't sound natural in context
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disagree Lara Barnett : It sounds a bit odd to use "secrets" in this context, but to say "have no secrets for you" sounds like a very incorrect way to use English.
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Will no longer be a mystery to you

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agree FoundInTrans
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agree Lara Barnett
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you'll know Zeepy inside out

I'm not sure from the context given that mentioning solutions is essential, but if it's for a marketing brochure it needs to be kept short, simple and positive. A literal translation of not having any secrets or mystery anymore sounds rather negative to my ears - as though it's quite a complicated concept to get your head around.

I find this solution sounds much more positive and is a punchy and natural way of putting this message across.
Note from asker:
Your suggestion was good too.
Peer comment(s):

agree Wolf Draeger
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Thank you, Wolf.
agree katsy
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Thanks, katsy.
agree Solen Fillatre : love it!
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Thank you, Solen.
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you'll become a Zeepy whizz/master (in no time)!

Zeepy - Zippy - Whizz!
Zeepy geek-masters then graduate to become Zeewhizzes or Zeepmasters :-D
Example sentence:

This leaflet will answer all your question...you'll become a Zeepy whizz in no time!

This leaflet will answer all your question...you'll become a Zeepy master in no time!

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