Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
completándose con
English translation:
This is supplemented/joined/supported/complemented by (an analysis...)
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Manuel Aburto
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completándose con
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Hola,
Mismo extracto:
El Estudio está estructurado en diez bloques diferenciados, en los que se analizan los diferentes países iberoamericanos atendiendo a si disponen de normativa específica sobre protección de datos, habeas data o protección de la privacidad, ***completándose con el análisis*** de las relaciones con países de América del Norte y la Unión Europea (capítulo en que los autores han analizado la propuesta de Reglamento Europeo), la relación con el acceso a la información y, el análisis de los criterios nacionales para la realización de transferencias internacionales de datos. Los autores valoran además muy positivamente el trabajo realizado, en el que han jugado un papel fundamental las nuevas tecnologías.
Traducción:
"..., and it [study] is completed/complemented with..."
Una vez más, gracias por todos sus aportes.
Mismo extracto:
El Estudio está estructurado en diez bloques diferenciados, en los que se analizan los diferentes países iberoamericanos atendiendo a si disponen de normativa específica sobre protección de datos, habeas data o protección de la privacidad, ***completándose con el análisis*** de las relaciones con países de América del Norte y la Unión Europea (capítulo en que los autores han analizado la propuesta de Reglamento Europeo), la relación con el acceso a la información y, el análisis de los criterios nacionales para la realización de transferencias internacionales de datos. Los autores valoran además muy positivamente el trabajo realizado, en el que han jugado un papel fundamental las nuevas tecnologías.
Traducción:
"..., and it [study] is completed/complemented with..."
Una vez más, gracias por todos sus aportes.
Proposed translations
(English)
Proposed translations
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Joshua Parker
Mexico
Mexico
Native in English
Specializes in field
Mexico
Trilingually educated, globally trained.
Native in: English (Variants: British, US) 
Works in: Spanish to English, French to English, English to Spanish, and 4 more.
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20
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This is supplemented/joined/supported/complemented by (an analysis...)
Break it up by starting a new sentence.
All the text is saying here is that the study analyzes (or explores/discusses, which are often better translations of 'analizar' in this type of text) whether Ibero-American countries have specific regulations on data protection, etc., and THEN GOES ON to analyze relationships with North America (U.S./Canada) and the EU, etc. So you can just phrase that however you see fit.
The source doesn't appear to be particularly well written but you just have to cut out the chaff and focus on the key message the author is trying to convey.
It's often advisable to break down these long-winded sentences in Spanish into shorter, more concise sentences in English.
All the text is saying here is that the study analyzes (or explores/discusses, which are often better translations of 'analizar' in this type of text) whether Ibero-American countries have specific regulations on data protection, etc., and THEN GOES ON to analyze relationships with North America (U.S./Canada) and the EU, etc. So you can just phrase that however you see fit.
The source doesn't appear to be particularly well written but you just have to cut out the chaff and focus on the key message the author is trying to convey.
It's often advisable to break down these long-winded sentences in Spanish into shorter, more concise sentences in English.
Peer comment(s):
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flaneur23
1 day 13 hrs
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Tim Friese
: I agree that this passage should be re-written in the English for flow and style, but I think the key meaning here is 'finally' / 'to conclude' and not 'support/complement'
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AllegroTrans
: right idea but yoiur wording is a tad on the clumsy side and could be simplified
3 days 13 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
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Patricia Fierro, M. Sc.
Ecuador
Ecuador
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&
English
Works in field
Ecuador
Language and engineering expert
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, English
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:
170
This study would be completed/complemented
Te sugiero iniciar otra frase, porque sino suena confuso.
Peer comment(s):
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Tim Friese
: But 'complete' and 'complement' are not synonyms; pick one
2 days 19 hrs
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Francois Boye
United States
United States
United States
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167
and, to conclude, the analysis of ...
My take
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Tim Friese
: This, others are too distracted by the false friends
2 days 19 hrs
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David Hollywood
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Works in field
worked for int. orgs (IMF, OAS, IDB)
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1245
with additional complementary data on
I would say
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AllegroTrans
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thanks AT and keep safe
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Tim Friese
: The meaning to me seems 'finally' and not 'complementary'. RAE meaning #2
2 days 19 hrs
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+1
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Ana Lesser
Canada
Canada
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Canada
Doc. legales, iGaming, deportes, gral.
Native in: Spanish (Variants: Latin American, Chilean, Mexican)
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with complementary data
Concuerdo con David, pero elimino la palabra "additional", que no está en el texto original.
Me parece que éste término es mejor que "conclude" (concluir) porqué no podemos asegurar (según lo que dice el texto en español) que esto sea la conclusión final del texto. Más bien, es información complementaria o adicional. Es posible que el texto tenga otra conclusión.
Saludos!
Me parece que éste término es mejor que "conclude" (concluir) porqué no podemos asegurar (según lo que dice el texto en español) que esto sea la conclusión final del texto. Más bien, es información complementaria o adicional. Es posible que el texto tenga otra conclusión.
Saludos!
Peer comment(s):
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AllegroTrans
2 hrs
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Taña Dalglish
: You could have agreed though with David, noting the omission of "additional" rather than duplicating his input (that is what ProZ rules suggest - unwritten/understood by many, perhaps?). I am not saying you are incorrect.
2 hrs
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Thanks for the input Taña
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Adrian MM.
Austria
Austria
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Austria
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586
Spanish term (edited):
completándose con el análisis
rounding off with an analysis
The only points I would add or 'round off with' are that (howls and squeals of protest over the 'right register') the latter may be idiomatic, but bog-standard to native English speakers, plus an an analysis with the indef. art. would, again, be more natural in the context than 'the analysis'.
Peer comment(s):
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AllegroTrans
: OK but I think as a lawyer you have allowed a tad of poetic licence here, so although I will not howl or squeal I think this is more along the lines of addition/additional
3 hrs
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*One* of the meanings of round off is additionally, plus dictionaries - as pointed out before - are an 'aid to construction' in EN law https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/round off 'he rounded off his property by purchase of the additional land'.
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Tim Friese
: This is the correct meaning, though I would prefer a simpler option like: 'finally' 'to conclude', etc.
2 days 6 hrs
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Thanks again and gracias! Agreed that this more colloquial, as used at pre-Corona prof. and law conferences.
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Taña Dalglish
Jamaica
Jamaica
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Jamaica
Translating the Ideas Behind the Words
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Related KudoZ points
:
735
culminating in/ending with
Two options: "culminating in/ending with". Many ways to word this!
The Study is structured in ten different blocks, in which the different Latin American countries are analyz(s)ed in terms of whether they have specific regulations on data protection, habeas data or privacy protection, **culminating in** the analysis of relations with North American countries and the European Union ...
Habeas data - Wikipedia en.wikipedia.org › wiki › Habeas_data
Habeas data is an individual complaint file before a constitutional court and related to the privacy of personal data. The first such complaint is the habeas corpus (which is roughly translated as “[we command] you have the body”).
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The Study is structured in ten **distinct** blocks, in which the different
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Comment:
1) I am not allowed to say what I would really like to say here in this forum (as I would be in contravention of strict guidelines that ProZ has laid out as far as other contributions by ProZ colleagues are concerned), so I will leave you with this third option:
The Study is structured into ten distinct blocks, in which the different Latin American countries are analyz(s)ed depending on whether they have specific regulations on the following:
- data protection;
- habeas data; and/or
- privacy protection
**culminating in (including) an analysis** of relations with North American countries and the European Union (chapter in which the authors have analyz(s)ed the proposed European Regulation), the relationship with access to information, and the analysis of the national criteria for carrying out international data transfers. The authors are also greatly appreciative of the work carried out in which new technolies have played a fundamental role.
Regards and stay safe!
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Oops ... last line: "... new technologies ...".
The Study is structured in ten different blocks, in which the different Latin American countries are analyz(s)ed in terms of whether they have specific regulations on data protection, habeas data or privacy protection, **culminating in** the analysis of relations with North American countries and the European Union ...
Habeas data - Wikipedia en.wikipedia.org › wiki › Habeas_data
Habeas data is an individual complaint file before a constitutional court and related to the privacy of personal data. The first such complaint is the habeas corpus (which is roughly translated as “[we command] you have the body”).
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Note added at 3 hrs (2020-04-17 23:49:15 GMT)
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The Study is structured in ten **distinct** blocks, in which the different
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Note added at 17 hrs (2020-04-18 13:09:05 GMT)
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Comment:
1) I am not allowed to say what I would really like to say here in this forum (as I would be in contravention of strict guidelines that ProZ has laid out as far as other contributions by ProZ colleagues are concerned), so I will leave you with this third option:
The Study is structured into ten distinct blocks, in which the different Latin American countries are analyz(s)ed depending on whether they have specific regulations on the following:
- data protection;
- habeas data; and/or
- privacy protection
**culminating in (including) an analysis** of relations with North American countries and the European Union (chapter in which the authors have analyz(s)ed the proposed European Regulation), the relationship with access to information, and the analysis of the national criteria for carrying out international data transfers. The authors are also greatly appreciative of the work carried out in which new technolies have played a fundamental role.
Regards and stay safe!
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Oops ... last line: "... new technologies ...".
Peer comment(s):
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Tim Friese
: Good options, and any synonyms would be fine
2 days 19 hrs
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Thanks Tim. Appreciate your support. Stay very safe too!
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Discussion
completándose con el análisis = completed with a supplementary analysis of relations with America and.....
Espero ser de ayuda. Adios!